request for review of Ubuntu 9.04 RC announcement

[Matt Zimmerman]

On Wed, Apr 15, 2009 at 02:31:47AM -0700, Steve Langasek wrote:
> Here is a draft for the Ubuntu 9.04 release candidate announcement:
> 
>   https://wiki.ubuntu.com/JauntyJackalope/RCAnnouncement
> 
> Please review and advise me of any problems.

The product is simply "Netbook Remix", not "Netbook Remix Edition".  I
corrected this in the above announcement, but please check that it's correct
elsewhere (e.g. download pages).

The list of netbook models needs review and signoff from Henrik and Pete.
While these were the original targets, some of these models have known bugs
which couldn't be fixed in time, which may make them unsuitable for
inclusion in a list of recommended netbooks.

The list of features seems very long, with all of the flavours included.  A
lot of scrolling is required to get to the download information.  Most of
this information duplicates the shorter summaries at the top.

Can we link to a list of known issues with the RC?

In "About Ubuntu" I added a reference to netbooks.  This section could
perhaps be moved lower down, just above "Feedback and Helping" but it is OK
where it is (especially if we can shorten the feature section a bit).

-- 
 - mdz