Patch for Security Section
Adam Sommer
asommer70 at gmail.com
Tue Jan 29 03:29:54 UTC 2008
Hey Gilbert,
On Jan 27, 2008 11:28 PM, Gilbert Mendoza <gmendoza at gmail.com> wrote:
> Here's the latest patch for the server guide security section. The patch
> includes changes necessary for DocBook tag correctness with regard to
> differentiating user input, computer output, program listing, and commands
> entered. This is in response the the previous thread [1] regarding the
> matter.
>
> [1] https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives/ubuntu-doc/2008-January/010226.html
>
> Comments welcome.
>
>
I think the patch looks great, I like how you mixed the <userinput> with
<computeroutput> for the password dialogs, it does make the input a
different shade. My only question about the new patch is wouldn't the
following be <programlisting> since they're the content of config files?
<screen><varname>DIR_MODE=0750</varname></screen>
<screen><computeroutput>password required pam_unix.so nullok obscure
min=4 max=8 md5</computeroutput></screen>
<screen><computeroutput>password required pam_unix.so nullok obscure
min=6 max=8 md5</computeroutput></screen>
<screen><computeroutput>AllowGroups sshlogin</computeroutput></screen>
<screen><computeroutput>#exec /sbin/shutdown -r now "Control-Alt-Delete
pressed"</computeroutput></screen>
<screen><computeroutput>password --md5
$1$s3YiK$M3lxAbqA6JLm2FbDWnClQ0</computeroutput></screen>
<screen><computeroutput># lockalternative=true</computeroutput></screen>
I hope I'm not beating a dead horse with all this. I really don't want to
be too picky, but the rest of the guide wraps config file segments in
<programlisting> tags.
--
Party On,
Adam
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