Modification of Official Documentation proposal

Stuart Guest sguest at blakstar.plus.com
Wed Feb 13 13:50:32 UTC 2008


Hi,

Under the "Listen to online audio streams", under the "Music and audio" 
section, there is a paragraph which reads: "Rhythmbox is able to play 
most streaming audio, such as online radio shows.  However, some 
services require a special player to be used to listen to them."

I thought that part of the last sentence sounded slightly clumsy ("... 
to be used to listen to them.") and that it should be changed to simply 
"to be used."

Given that the section is referring to streaming *audio*, it would seem 
that the listening is already implied.

Thanks,

Stuart Guest




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