Techreview report of add-applications.xml

[Vignesh]

Hi...

add-applications.xml

*Under "add-applications-introduction"
-> The definition of package manager can be changed from, "A package manager is a program that installs and uninstalls software, and keeps track of all the components each piece of software needs." to "A package manager is a program that installs and uninstalls software, keeps track of all the components each piece of software needs and the updates available for already installed software."

*Under "gnome-app-install"
-> "You can also remove programs you do not want." to "You can also remove programs which you do not want." on account of correct grammar.

Awaiting your comments...
  
Regards
Vignesh....
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