Techreview report of "basic-commands" section (basic-commands.xml)

[Vignesh]

hi all..

Techreview report of "basic-commands" section (basic-commands.xml)

i have reviewed the pages starting from "using the guide" to "adding users". I found only in section inbetween which needed some more love.

"ifconfig" just had a one line description. i think it will be better if it has some more description.

this is my 1st techreview.. how do i fix this by myself?? 
  Regards

Vignesh....

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