JeOS tutorial (was: vi or nano in tutorial?)

[Adam Sommer]

>
> Just so that you know and won't be surprised if you happen to read Linux
> Magazine, chances are that the tutorial will be published there...
>
>
That's really cool, I do read Linux Magazine, congrats.  One very minor
adjustment, since it's going to be published, would be this line:

   "Note that at this point we could easily install any additional packages
that we might need using, for example, the *aptitude* command."
I think the "aptitude command" should read "aptitude utility" or "aptitude
command line utility" since you're talking about installing the package and
not executing the actual command.

Just a suggestion :)

-- 
Party On,
Adam
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