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[Matthew East]

Hi there,

On 21/08/07, Philipp Höhn <philipp at philipp-hoehn.de> wrote:
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> Hello everyone.
> I edited the following page ( https://help.ubuntu.com/community/Mac_mini
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Thanks for the work, that looks really good.

Just a quick reaction: it looks really good; but since the material
which you've added is more up to date than the material on the page,
and also looks to be substantially more polished, I think that you
should either:

1. Delete the original material and merge any extra information which
it supplied into the material which you've added.
2. Move the original material to a sub-page called "Edgy" and link to it.

Probably 1 is a better option, but if you think that the two sections
provide equally valid methods, one of which is valid for Edgy and one
of which is valid for Feisty, then you should go with option 2!

-- 
Matthew East
http://www.mdke.org
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