Cleaning up a wiki page.

[Brian Burger]

On 1/24/06, Matthew East <mdke at ubuntu.com> wrote:
> On Tue, 2006-01-24 at 06:11 +0000, Dean Sas wrote:
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> > Hi,
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> > Could someone give me some pointers on cleaning up
> > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/InstallingCompaqW200 ? It's listed in
> > CategoryCleanup and I can see that it doesn't seem very tidy, but am
> > unsure as to what exactly I should do to improve it. I've already
> > updated some of the instructions, such as the latest cvs information.
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> Check out https://wiki.ubuntu.com/WikiGuide hopefully it will help you
> out. In general, making the document a bit more user friendly. It
> broadly looks fine though.

For that particular page, I'd start with putting all that introductory
stuff into real sentences. Point form is useful, but actual English
sentences are friendlier.

There's also been a lot of work lately on getting the other wireless
pages on the wiki into shape - linking that page to & from the main
wireless networking pages would also be good.

Brian/Madpilot