musicvideophotos.xml.patch

[Matthew East]

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Hi,

* Will Simpson:
> Attached is a small patch that corrects some links and fattens the
> help dialog in the photo section of the musicvideophotos.xml. Added
> references to f-spot and did some linking to upstream documentation.
> 
> Comments welcome.

Nice one! Some very good stuff in there. Here are some minor remarks, if
you can address these and then redo the patch, that would be great!

1. You don't need a title inside a <note>... any program which renders
html from docbook will do something appropriate to signify that it is a
<note>. You can also use <tip>, <caution> etc. In this case, <tip> is
appropriate :)
2. In the link to the gthumb manual, it's probably best to simply point
at the base page of the manual (ghelp:gthumb" rather than
ghelp:gthumb#intro)
3. The f-spot section is new, so don't mark it as complete, but rather
"review".
4. You can link to the system manual for f-spot, rather than the online one.
5. Go ahead and use the &f-spot; menu entity that you created in your
previous patch.

> 1. Wonder if Graphics should be separated from Sound and Video like
> the gnome menu?

We merged them together recently on the basis that we thought separate
topics was overkill for what are quite related subjects.

> 2. Could find no mention of scanners in the Ubuntu documentation? I
> user 'rgrep scanner ubuntu-doc/ubuntu/C/*' I plan on rectifying this
> soon.

You're right, we don't have any. Maybe it can be included in the
Printing section. Note that you will possibly find some helpful material
at https://help.ubuntu.com/community/ScanningHowTo although it may not
be 100% reliable.

Matt
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