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[Matthew East]

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* Jeff Schering:
> On 12/23/06, Matthew East <mdke at ubuntu.com> wrote:
> 
>> Hi,
>>
>> Yesterday myself, Rich and mpt had a chat about the index design for the
>> various help applications for the next release. I had a go at making
>> some changes to Yelp which implement our ideas. The result is here:
>>
>> http://mdke.org/tmp/yelp.png
>>
>> Feedback appreciated!
> 
> Maybe change "Adding, Removing and Updating Applications" to "Add,
> Remove, and Update Software"
> 
> Maybe change "Running Server Applications" to "Run Server Software"
> 
> Maybe change "Printing and Faxing" to "Setup a Printer" and leave
> faxing "in the background"

We discussed some similar phrases in a previous thread and thought that
this type of language sounds like the imperative, and to use "-ing" in
the titles.

> Maybe change the order slightly by switching the printing and server lines.

Agreed.

Matt
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