Wiki pages for review

David Tangye tangye at exemail.com.au
Sat Apr 29 04:02:55 UTC 2006


On Fri, 2006-04-28 at 09:50 +0100, Phil Bull wrote:

> [1] https://wiki.ubuntu.com/InstallingSoftware

Just skimmed it. Thoughts so far though:

- Truely excellent.
- Intro is spot on, sets the context. Sets the reader at ease. He knows
why he is there/ knows if this is the right page to be, knows what is
expected of him. Great wording & grammar and writing style.
- Distinguishes CLEARLY between technical and learner solutions. Very
important IMO. Describes specifically the graphical and command-line
approach.
- Seems comprehensive.

Great example of how all pages need to be.






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