desktopguide/C/ch01.html ammendments

[Ned B]

Hi folks :-)

This is my first attempt at helping so please bear with me if this isn't 
exactly what you want.


Source:  http://doc.ubuntu.com/ubuntu/desktopguide/C/ch01.html

    * reference to "Mandrake" - I think it is now called Mandriva

    * suggestion to remove "a cent" from The Cost section thus making 
           the statement universal

    * Conflicting version information:

        "Thank you for your interest in Ubuntu Linux *6.04* -- our 
Dapper             Drake release."

        "The next release (Breezy Badger), the one for which this     
                    document was written, will be in October 2005, so 
its version                 number will be *5.10*."

    * erroneous "could" in the following

       "Another method of obtaining Ubuntu is to join a local Linux     
              Users Group (LUG) and ask if somebody *could* has a copy 
and               would not mind duplicating it. Normally, you will have 
to                           replace the CDs used for the duplication 
and reimburse any                   postage or delivery costs."

    * "an" should be "a" in the following

        If you do not know of a*n *LUG near you,



ned




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