Scott James Remnant
scott at netsplit.com
Mon Mar 28 22:32:54 UTC 2011
On Thu, Mar 24, 2011 at 2:34 PM, James Hunt <james.hunt at canonical.com> wrote:
I've tried to set this up at:
But I couldn't figure out how to make the bazaar keywords stuff work?
1.4 - the footnote here is , where is  ?
2.2 - the "indented block"s aren't indented
3.1.2 - should be "NIH Utility Library" (qv. http://launchpad.net/libnih)
4.1.1 & 4.1.2 - worth explaining the real difference between "task"
and "service" here, perhaps? or later?
4.2 - the footnote here is , where are  thru  ?! :p
- you leap into "blocking" here, which is a very very core upstart
concept, without explaining it
4.2.1 - signal events are created with the --no-wait option to emit,
there is no --emit option
5.3 - this is basically all completely wrong ...
5.4 - I wouldn't use the word "started" here, because it's easily
confused with the event and the started event is emitted when a task
is running not when it's finished
- and your example is wrong
5.6 - one of the things you can do in "pre-start" is cancel the start!
5.8 - and the big feature of "pre-stop" is you can cancel the stop!
5.9 seems to run-in with the next paragraph
8.2.3 - worth a | sort in there?
9.15 - "start on stopped mydb EXIT_SIGNAL=SEGV" ... ;-)
9.39 - really script/exec ? I'd just use exec there
17 - that should read "Scott James Remnant (Google)" no?
Is there anything in /usr/share/doc/upstart/README.Debian worth adding to this?
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