Opinions Please

[Darcy Casselman]

Hi Chris,

The "It's not pirated! Honest!" part made me cringe a bit.  I realize
explaining free software is difficult, and people will assume that
everything on kijiji or Craig's list is probably a scam, but I think
it's probably safer to simply not mention piracy at all.

Darcy.

On Thu, May 12, 2011 at 9:41 PM, Chris <candive1 at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi all,
> I am seeking opinions about my wording in an ad I placed on kijiji for the
> United Way STARS Program.
> I hope with your help I can increase the number of people who respond to the
> ad.
> The first thing I will be doing Monday is adding a picture of a complete
> system.
> http://owensound.kijiji.ca/c-buy-and-sell-computers-Free-PCs-for-Students-United-Way-of-Bruce-Grey-W0QQAdIdZ281518518
> Thank you very much for any opinions.
> Chris.
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