What Is Ubuntu? Website Feedback Please

[chrisjones at comcen.com.au]

I had an absolute complete computer newbie overlook my shoulder while I was on
the Ubuntu Forums and ask me what Ubuntu was yesterday. It prompted me to create
a small single page website with some brief introductory information on it
explaining what Ubuntu was. Something a little more simple than sending them to
www.ubuntu.com. I am just after some feedback for what you guys think. Good or
bad? It's still in early development keep in mind that changes will still happen.

Website URL below:
http://whatisubuntu.bravehost.com

Thanks in advance.

Chris Jones