<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">The kerning is off. I think if you're using Photoshop, you can fix it by changing the kerning from 'metrics' to 'optical' and that should fix it. :)<div> <div><div>On 11/02/2011, at 8:04 PM, Pumpkin Lord wrote:</div> <blockquote type="cite"><div>@Thorsten step by step in short. - Setting ubuntu in bold is much more effective to me, and it looks totally contrary from what you said, much more polisfed and "sensitive". Should I say that I played a lot with standard Ubuntu font, and I wasn't satisfied at all, at least considering title font. And about respecting visual identity. I guess then that I'm totally irrespective cause I used bold instead standard font. :) I never wanted to make my cover looks like an official sleeve rip-off. Othervise this topic would be pointless, as well as a DVD cover itself. - About wide tracking... The best I can tell you is that I respect your opinion. To me it's effective as it could be. Also I should mention that I played with warious characters spacing. About kerning, I dont's see anything that wrong, or misplaced. - I agree that bulleting with a centered text is not that great choice. That is the part of cover I'm still not satisfied with. - The big Ubuntu box is not perfectly lined with side boxes, because I lined the right "live CD" text with upper edge (guideline I set for myself). So I wanted to make all 4 sides of cover layers to have proportional distance from edge (you can check it). Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I alredy changed some stuff after this version you reviewed, and I will change few more before I release a complete pack on spreadubuntu, and deviantart. I think this artwork sum up everything I think about your feedback: <a href="http://theal.deviantart.com/art/Opinion-not-Fact-194945734?q=gallery%3Atheal%2F7848059&qo=1">http://theal.deviantart.com/art/Opinion-not-Fact-194945734?q=gallery%3Atheal%2F7848059&qo=1</a> Cheers my friend. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art </div></blockquote></div> </div></body></html>