[ubuntu-art] [Breathe] banners for relase

[daniel planas armangue]

El jue, 21-05-2009 a las 17:00 +0200, Thorsten Wilms escribió:
> On Thu, 2009-05-21 at 14:06 +0200, daniel planas armangue wrote:
> > I created some Banners to help spread the Breathe icon set in first
> > relase. Hope you like and comment or submit your ideas
> 
> Quite nice.
> 
> I think you should use "Breathe Icon Set" as headline on Banner.png,
> too, to clearly say what it is.
> 
> The reflection of the folder on dark background doesn't look right. It
> ends too sharp and there seems to be a trace of green that shouldn't be
> there.
> 
> A subtle warm tint of the background gradient could make it look
> friendlier while still keeping it sharp.
> 
> You should drop the quotation marks "" from the slogan, because they
> don't add meaning but are rather distracting.
> 
> The icon collection could benefit from more space between the icons,but
> you would have to make the banner larger, then.
> 
> 
> -- 
> Thorsten Wilms
> 
> thorwil's design for free software:
> http://thorwil.wordpress.com/
> 


At the moment I am collecting all suggestions for improving my designs.
please any idea is welcome.
in that moment i'm working on 8 or 10  posters for Breathe

Daniel.P