[ubuntu-art] Feedback on Proposed Default Wallpaper

[Chris Tomalty]

Hey (I'm new to the whole mailing list thing, so please bear with me if I
mess up a bit :) )

I was looking at the default wallpapers proposed for Jaunty in the Incoming
Artwork section on the wiki (
https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Jaunty/AlphaBackgrounds ) and I
don't think that it's really possible to do a jackalope as well in a similar
style as we did the Heron and the Ibex.  I decided to open Photoshop and
tool around, and my submission is on the AlphaBackgrounds page under Ubuntu
Energy.

This is my first creative submission to the Ubuntu community and I would
like some feedback as to its quality and/or suitability.  One of the people
in the comments section said that we shouldn't have text, but my design
feels incomplete without it and the black bar.

Anyways, any feedback that I could use to improve the submission?  Need we
use animals now?

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