I have some improvements to the wording here and there. I could send it to you, but that's not very efficient for such minor and pretty non-controversial changes. What if I just do the non-controversial stuff right there, and email you about the stuff which needs consensus? (Example: [old] One thing you might be able to look forward to is the possibility of packages created in time for release, the new KDE 4 desktop. However, KDE 4 will not be the default desktop environment for Kubuntu 7.10, but you can guarantee the development team will work hard to bring you installable packages as soon as they possibly can. [/old] I would rewrite this in: One thing you can look forward to is the possibility of packages of the upcoming new KDE 4 desktop created in time for release. However, KDE 4 will not be the default desktop environment for Kubuntu 7.10, though we can guarantee the development team will work hard to bring you installable packages as soon as they possibly can. Not too controversial, right? I didn't change the meaning, just the way it was written. Now I could also rewrite it in the following way (but I would ask you about that, which I'm doing right now): One thing the users will be able to look forward to are prerelease packages of KDE 4. KDE 4 will not be ready in time for Kubunty Gutsy, so it will not be the default desktop environment, but we can guarantee the development team will work hard to bring you installable packages as soon as they can, and they will also improve these over the course of the Gutsy lifecycle. Now this is controversial, because: I removed the 'maybe' part of the packages for KDE 4, and added the part where they will be improved over the lifetime of gutsy. I'm not sure about those two, so this needs feedback. So, I would change the first one, ask about the second. If you're okay with that, I will proof-read the doc, ask about difficult stuff, and change the minor things. Deal? Grtz Jos <div> On 8/23/07, Richard A. Johnson <<a href="mailto:nixternal@ubuntu.com">nixternal@ubuntu.com</a>> wrote:<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;"> <a href="https://wiki.kubuntu.org/GutsyGibbon/Tribe5/Kubuntu">https://wiki.kubuntu.org/GutsyGibbon/Tribe5/Kubuntu</a> I have completed the release notes to the best of my current ability and I apologize ahead of time for my procrastination on this as well as the inability to complete them to 100% of my liking. There are still 2 subjects I was unsure about. * KDE Sudo * KDE PIM Enterprise So if someone who has or knows more information could complete these, I would greatly appreciate it. Sorry once again for dropping the ball on this. -- Richard A. Johnson <a href="mailto:nixternal@ubuntu.com">nixternal@ubuntu.com</a> GPG Key: 0x2E2C0124 -- kubuntu-devel mailing list <a href="mailto:kubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com">kubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com</a> Modify settings or unsubscribe at: <a href="https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/kubuntu-devel">https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/kubuntu-devel </a> </blockquote></div>