[Bug 783283] [NEW] Welcome to Kubuntu Docs Review

Steven Richards 783283 at bugs.launchpad.net
Mon May 16 03:56:15 UTC 2011


Public bug reported:

Binary package hint: kubuntu-docs

Just reviewing the Kubuntu Docs as requested by DarkwingDuck
This is for the Subdirectory of "Welcome to Kubuntu" under Kubuntu Documentation, more will be following

Kubuntu Releases:
...on the netbook remix can be found in the the section called “Kubuntu Netbook Remix 10.04” section. - says section twice
The paragraph for Kubuntu 10.04 and Kubuntu Netbook Remix 10.04 sound a lot alike, how about this:

Kubuntu 10.04
 Features KDE 4.4.2 to be used on either laptops or desktop computers. Kubuntu is a full-featured desktop operating system that contains plenty of applications to suit your everyday needs, with more than 20,000 other titles available to be easily installed.

Kubuntu Netbook Remix 10.04
It's nearly identical to Kubuntu 10.04 for Laptops and Desktops, with all the same functionality and simplicity, but is optimized for the screen size of your netbook. It even features all the great apps you can install in Kubuntu 10.04.

Installing Kubuntu:
Page is pretty bare, I would suggest either adding a more in depth guide or removing it completely, cause if they are viewing the help screen then they have already installed (except if using a live CD).

Getting Support for Kubuntu - (sub) Kubuntu System Documentation

- Kubuntu ships with system documentation covering various topics which
provide introduction as well as configuration and troubleshooting
topics.

+ Kubuntu ships with system documentation covering various topics which
provide an introduction to Kubuntu as well as configuration and
troubleshooting topics.

Contribute to Kubuntu page: 
I'd recommend just direct linking it to the "Contributing to Kubuntu" topic instead of having them click around.

Contacting the Kubuntu Project:
Change title to "Contacting the Kubuntu Project Team" ?

** Affects: kubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: Confirmed

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