New version of Karoshi

[Herman Bos]

linuxgirlie wrote:
> Oh, Ok, I think I know where I have gone wrong, to make the system 
> seem easier for users we gave each server a name for example the PDC 
> is called Xen, these names where given before we even knew about the 
> Xen virtual server stuff, so this might confuse people a little. I 
> have also done some very bad grammar, for example, I wrote:
>
> When a user logs into the network their username and password are 
> authenticated by Xen. Once authenticated, Xen passes the login script 
> to the client computer, which gives the user their network connections 
> automatically.
>
> When in fact I should of wrote:
>
> When a user logs into the network their username and password are 
> authenticated by Samba. Once authenticated, the PDC passes the login 
> script to the client computer, which gives the user their network 
> connections automatically.
>
> I tried to keep things to the computer names and not the service names 
> as it starts to get confusing for newbie users, they start saying what 
> is Samba or what is WinBind etc etc instead of going oh, thats the 
> same as my PDC at the moment does, I tried to keep it simple but may 
> of gone to far.
>
> I will look into having to re-write these descriptions. Are there 
> anything else that makes the project look LOW quality, I am trying to 
> promote this to UK schools, and any hints or tips would be welcome.
>
> Jo
>
>
PDC (Primary Domain Controller) is just as confusing for a "newbie" I 
guess. :) Maybe something like central authentication server? (although 
its a little more)

At least I would list the features and possibilities not the services. 
Try to make it clear and understandable.

I would suggest to give some technical description as well. For us ;) or 
for the system administrator of school X who wonders what this magic 
solution is all about. There should be some technical description about 
installation and maintainance at least.

And what David points out. :)

We still don't know what Karoshi is exactly.

Regards,

Herman