[MERGE] Reduce evangelism in the User Guide

James Westby jw+debian at jameswestby.net
Thu Mar 27 09:24:19 GMT 2008


On Thu, 2008-03-27 at 18:13 +1000, Ian Clatworthy wrote:
> A number of users including Paul Moore and Stephen Turnbull have
> indicated that they find the tone of the User Guide grating at times.
> This patch removes some of the over-enthusiastic text phrases and
> section from the opening chapters. This certainly improves the
> signal-to-noise ratio and hopefully makes the manual more acceptable to
> more people.
> 
> FWIW, I continue to think that manuals without editorial comment now and
> then can become very dull. A balance is required. If the result is
> coming across as smug (as has been indicated), then the balance hasn't
> been right.

Hi Ian,

Your changes look good to me.

Thanks,

James







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