[MERGE] Reduce evangelism in the User Guide
James Westby
jw+debian at jameswestby.net
Thu Mar 27 09:24:19 GMT 2008
On Thu, 2008-03-27 at 18:13 +1000, Ian Clatworthy wrote:
> A number of users including Paul Moore and Stephen Turnbull have
> indicated that they find the tone of the User Guide grating at times.
> This patch removes some of the over-enthusiastic text phrases and
> section from the opening chapters. This certainly improves the
> signal-to-noise ratio and hopefully makes the manual more acceptable to
> more people.
>
> FWIW, I continue to think that manuals without editorial comment now and
> then can become very dull. A balance is required. If the result is
> coming across as smug (as has been indicated), then the balance hasn't
> been right.
Hi Ian,
Your changes look good to me.
Thanks,
James
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