Fwd: [Python-Dev] Primer on distributed revision control?
Martin Pool
mbp at canonical.com
Wed Mar 26 07:02:09 GMT 2008
On Wed, Mar 26, 2008 at 8:45 AM, Paul Moore <p.f.moore at gmail.com> wrote:
> With regard to writing style, I agree with Steven Turnbull - the
> cheerful, nearly-smug style is fairly grating. (And the big, slightly
> rounded font used, plus the cheery cartoon-style diagrams, reinforce
> that impression, making it feel deliberate, rather than just an
> unfortunate turn of phrase).
I think that tone came from people who were just really enthusiastic
about their topic. I agree it's rather too much in some places and we
should rephrase it. It's a case where showing the tool is useful or
simple is much better than saying so. Thank you for this and the
other feedback.
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Martin <http://launchpad.net/~mbp/>
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