Initial thoughts on Bzr docs
Matthew Revell
matthew.revell at canonical.com
Thu Sep 27 18:13:30 BST 2007
Hey all,
Overall, I'm highly impressed with the Bazaar documentation.
Stylistically, it generally crisp and straightforward.
Missing docs
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My main priority is to ensure that there are no major gaps in Bazaar's
docs. You'll have seen my meeting announcement already, where I'd like
to discuss what's missing in the docs.
However, I don't see any reason not to kick off the discussion here
before the meetings! You guys know Bazaar much better than I do :)
Mini-tutorial
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Initial suggestions:
* Rename to "Bazaar in 10 minutes" to emphasise ease of Bazaar, to
show it requires little commitment from the user and to differentiate
from the main tutorial.
* Flesh out the text a little.
* Use graphics: I'm really keen for your input here. I wonder if we
need to find a way to break up the text but obviously there's no GUI
to give us a flashy screen shots. Perhaps some illustrations? I may be
totally off the mark here.
I think we should put this mini-tutorial right up-front, not only in
the documentation but also right up at the top of the bazaar-vcs.org
home page. I think it's slightly lost where it is now on the
bazaar-vcs.org home page.
I reckon it can be an excellent crossover between documentation and
promotional material.
User guide
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Along with the user reference, this is obviously one of the main
places where we need to ensure we fill gaps.
Tutorial: I'd like to highlight this on the doc home page. I'd also
like to break it down into smaller chunks, each chunk with an end
goal. This would be similar in style to the Launchpad feature guide
at:
https://help.launchpad.net/FeatureHighlights
Again, I'm largely reliant on you guys to help me find gaps in the tutorial.
Best practice and advanced topics: I wonder if these should be merged
and renamed something like "Masterclasses". The smart server article,
for example, could sit in either section. I'm very keen to add to this
section and again look to you for suggestions. I think this is a great
opportunity to introduce some of the community tools, as well.
Thanks, I look forward to hearing from you :)
Next, I'll post some suggested rewrites of existing material to the list.
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Matthew Revell
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