Doc review & quick ref card - anyone with some DTP skills?
aaron.bentley at utoronto.ca
Wed Jul 25 14:01:21 BST 2007
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Sabin Iacob wrote:
> Aaron Bentley wrote:
>> There are some line-spacing issues:
>> - - the example text seems to have too little whitespace between lines,
>> especially on FF.
>> - - the example text should be closer to its heading than to the
> somewhat fixed
The association of examples to their headings is much improved.
The line-spacing within examples still looks tight. For example, under
"Existing project", the "y" of "myproject" almost touches the i of "init".
>> * I think we should favour short options when they exist, e.g. for
>> the bundle example.
> in "bundle"'s case it was ok, but for commit, branch, remove, update,
> the short aliases (ci, get/clone, rm, up) may be confusing to the
> non-hardcore user :)
I think Ian meant short options, not short aliases. For bundle, he'd
like to see "-o", not "--output".
Personally, I think the long options telegraph the meaning better.
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