[PATCH] bzr documentation clean-up, 2

[James Westby]

On (02/03/07 07:48), Brad Crittenden wrote:
> Second pass at this patch.  Incorporates input from Aaron Bentley and
> James Westby.  All suggestions were accepted except for two where the
> sentences were re-worked for clarity.
> 
> Branch can be found at:
> http://bazaar.launchpad.net/~bradcrittenden/bzr/doc-cleanup

+1, with oune tiny fixup that the person submitting the changes can do.

Thanks again,

James

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