Bazaar Wikipedia page

[John Arbash Meinel]

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Matthew Revell wrote:
> Matthew Revell wrote:
> 
>>> I've been looking at Bazaar's Wikipedia page and I was wondering if you
>>> chaps could help me to polish it.
> 
> Here's the link, btw:
> 
> http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bazaar_software
> 
> :-)
> 
> --
> Matthew Revell - talk to me about Launchpad
> IRC: matthewrevell, #launchpad on irc.freenode.net
> 

Its a shame. I *really* like lists. I think they are clear and to the
point, rather than having a lot of extra verbiage just to tie the
sentences together.

I really don't see how bullet point comparisons with another VCS are
considered 'unencyclopedic', but hey, it is there choice.

I think we could change "Features" to read more like a paragraph. I'm
guessing we could probably just remove "Bazaar vs Baz", or maybe just
down-play it.

For "Launchpad" you could just bring add some sort of "Interoperability
with Other Tools", and then mention possible integration with "Trac",
bzr-svn compatibility, and a section on Launchpad integration.

How does that sound?

John
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