Bazaar Wikipedia page

Matthew Revell matthew.revell at canonical.com
Wed Jan 10 15:41:43 GMT 2007


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Hello everyone,

I've been looking at Bazaar's Wikipedia page and I was wondering if you
chaps could help me to polish it.

The main problem we have is that the page has been tagged as
"unencyclopedic", as much of it is in the form of bullet-lists.

I don't have enough technical knowledge re Bazaar, yet. So, it'd be
great if you could help me turn these bullet-lists into paragraphs that
succinctly explain each feature and the benefits it offers.

Other than that, I'd like to include some information about the benefits
of using Launchpad with Bazaar, but retaining the emphasis on Bazaar as
a standalone product.

I've already rewritten the introductory section, to make it a bit
clearer, and I'll do some further rewrites. However, like I say, I need
your help on the meat of the article :)

I reckon Wikipedia's a great opportunity for us to tell people about
Bazaar. Any help you can offer would be fantastic.

Cheers.

- --
Matthew Revell - talk to me about Launchpad
IRC: matthewrevell, #launchpad on irc.freenode.net

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