[merge] Registry

Martin Pool mbp at canonical.com
Fri Oct 13 02:19:27 BST 2006


On 13/10/2006, at 11:00 , John Arbash Meinel wrote:

>> I don't think it's incorrect as originally written, though yours  
>> might
>> be clearer.  Sometimes I try to say "may be clearer as".
>
> This seems to have too many commas:
>
> Keep a record of a future object, and, on request, load it.
>
> How about:
>
> """Keep a record of a possible object.
>
> When requested, load and return it.
> """

+1

> I'm happy to clean up documentation. Though I'm a little concerned it
> may become one more hoop to jump through before we can merge anything.
> And it is also a place that can be subject to a lot of bike-shedding.

Yes, grammar, like bike shed color, is something it's easy for people  
to have an opinion on or pick nits in.  The guideline should be:  
review for *substance* not apostrophes; if you happen to notice small  
things along the way then feel free to mention them.

There is also a risk of a perverse incentive against documentation:  
your patch added really good docstring coverage, but as a result got  
these extra review steps.

-- 
Martin




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