Rev 6480: Review feedback. in file:///home/vila/src/bzr/releases/work/

[Vincent Ladeuil]

At file:///home/vila/src/bzr/releases/work/

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revno: 6480
revision-id: v.ladeuil+lp at free.fr-20120312081002-jfkv5kmm6x3oukn7
parent: v.ladeuil+lp at free.fr-20120309174122-jocjl8fqkh1hr440
committer: Vincent Ladeuil <v.ladeuil+lp at free.fr>
branch nick: work
timestamp: Mon 2012-03-12 09:10:02 +0100
message:
  Review feedback.
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=== modified file 'doc/developers/releasing.txt'
--- a/doc/developers/releasing.txt	2012-03-09 17:41:22 +0000
+++ b/doc/developers/releasing.txt	2012-03-12 08:10:02 +0000
@@ -253,11 +253,14 @@
 
 #. Add or check the summary of the release into the "What's New" document.
 
-  If this is the first release in a new series, make sure to update the
-  introduction and mentions the date of this first release and until when
-  the series is expected to be supported. Looking at ``bzr annotate`` for
-  previous series should give you the right hints. The
-  ``doc/en/_templates/index.html`` file should also be updated.
+  If this is the first release in a new series make sure to update the
+  introduction mentioning:
+
+  * the date of this first release,
+  * until when the series is expected to be supported.
+
+  Looking at ``bzr annotate`` for previous series should give you the right
+  hints. The ``doc/en/_templates/index.html`` file should also be updated.
 
 #. To check that all bugs mentioned in the release notes are actually
    marked as closed in Launchpad, you can run