Rev 5300: (mbp) don't say "open source" in docs (Martin Pool) in file:///home/pqm/archives/thelove/bzr/%2Btrunk/

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revno: 5300 [merge]
revision-id: pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com-20100617075036-nukzkgr82l4838ps
parent: pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com-20100617020620-8if212a9t349vbku
parent: mbp at canonical.com-20100602051827-8lmbzjf14ecskk44
committer: Canonical.com Patch Queue Manager <pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com>
branch nick: +trunk
timestamp: Thu 2010-06-17 08:50:36 +0100
message:
  (mbp) don't say "open source" in docs (Martin Pool)
modified:
  doc/en/tutorials/using_bazaar_with_launchpad.txt using_bazaar_with_lp-20071211073140-7msh8uf9a9h4y9hb-1
  doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt introducing_bazaar.t-20071114035000-q36a9h57ps06uvnl-5
=== modified file 'doc/en/tutorials/using_bazaar_with_launchpad.txt'
--- a/doc/en/tutorials/using_bazaar_with_launchpad.txt	2009-12-02 20:34:07 +0000
+++ b/doc/en/tutorials/using_bazaar_with_launchpad.txt	2010-06-02 05:18:27 +0000
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 the software: the team, users, training partners, support partners,
 third-party developers and so on.
 
-Great communities are well understood in the open source world.
+Great communities are well understood in the free software community.
 Their applicability extends well beyond that though: most
 successful commercial software vendors are well skilled at
 building and managing the communities that grow up around
@@ -93,8 +93,8 @@
 
 As well as sponsoring `Ubuntu <http://www.ubuntu.com>`_ and
 `Bazaar <http://bazaar-vcs.org>`_ development, Canonical
-provides Launchpad, https://launchpad.net, as a free service
-for the open source community. Launchpad is one of the most
+provides Launchpad, <https://launchpad.net/>, as a free service
+for the community. Launchpad is one of the most
 exciting CDEs around for several notable reasons:
 
 * it models relationships between many of things tracked, e.g.
@@ -179,10 +179,10 @@
 Accessing code in Launchpad using Bazaar
 ========================================
 
-Getting the code for an open source project
--------------------------------------------
+Getting the code for a project
+------------------------------
 
-As Launchpad keeps track of thousands of open source projects
+As Launchpad keeps track of thousands of projects
 and their latest code whether it be managed by Bazaar, CVS or Subversion,
 Bazaar users can grab that code as easily as this::
 
@@ -447,8 +447,7 @@
 further integrated, please contact us on the Bazaar mailing list,
 bazaar at lists.canonical.com.
 
-While designed as a free service to support open source projects,
+While designed as a free service to support free software projects,
 Canonical may make Launchpad available to commercial software developers
 depending on their requirements. We would be happy to hear from you
-if you think Launchpad would be useful for managing your community,
-open source or otherwise.
+if you think Launchpad would be useful for managing your community.

=== modified file 'doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt'
--- a/doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt	2010-03-11 04:33:41 +0000
+++ b/doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt	2010-06-02 05:18:27 +0000
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
  * trunk quality and stability can be kept higher, making everyone's
    job less stressful
 
- * in open source communities:
+ * in open communities:
 
    * easier for non-core developers to create and maintain changes