Rev 4167: Review feedback. in http://people.ubuntu.com/~robertc/baz2.0/pending/ec2-ubuntu

Robert Collins robertc at robertcollins.net
Mon Mar 23 00:25:40 GMT 2009


At http://people.ubuntu.com/~robertc/baz2.0/pending/ec2-ubuntu

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revno: 4167
revision-id: robertc at robertcollins.net-20090323002527-95y8gqjyzjuzazxl
parent: robertc at robertcollins.net-20090320051948-hqjmr3bfn8pscv8z
committer: Robert Collins <robertc at robertcollins.net>
branch nick: ec2-ubuntu
timestamp: Mon 2009-03-23 11:25:27 +1100
message:
  Review feedback.
=== modified file 'doc/developers/ec2.txt'
--- a/doc/developers/ec2.txt	2009-03-20 05:19:48 +0000
+++ b/doc/developers/ec2.txt	2009-03-23 00:25:27 +0000
@@ -70,14 +70,14 @@
 
 You do need to have an RSA keypair to get the initial password for a
 Windows machine, even though you can't use it to log in later.
-``ec2-get-password`` take the full path to the private key to obtain the
-password from amazon, and ``ec2-add-keypair`` creates a named keypair at
+``ec2-get-password`` takes the full path to the private key to obtain the
+password from Amazon, and ``ec2-add-keypair`` creates a named keypair at
 Amazon and returns the private path. One keypair is all that is needed.
 This is distinct from the account identifier - likely due to the different
 toolchains in use (the keypairs are used for unix ssh keys, and I (Robert)
 suspect a rather unix friendly core at Amazon).
 Once a custom image is made with a saved password, you can skip using 
-``ec2-get-password`` (which is only needed for windows anyway).
+``ec2-get-password`` (which is only needed for Windows anyway).
 
 It would be nice if rdesktop could use private key authentication but
 apparently not.




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