Rev 3079: Quick Start Card tweaks including fix for #165080 (Ian Clatworthy) in file:///home/pqm/archives/thelove/bzr/%2Btrunk/

Canonical.com Patch Queue Manager pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com
Wed Dec 5 06:01:23 GMT 2007


At file:///home/pqm/archives/thelove/bzr/%2Btrunk/

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revno: 3079
revision-id:pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com-20071205060118-l1gg524ng5twr0uw
parent: pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com-20071205035041-vjo05rrhyrqqmgxf
parent: ian.clatworthy at internode.on.net-20071205051920-zj97muk7k5pzjne9
committer: Canonical.com Patch Queue Manager <pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com>
branch nick: +trunk
timestamp: Wed 2007-12-05 06:01:18 +0000
message:
  Quick Start Card tweaks including fix for #165080 (Ian Clatworthy)
added:
  doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.png quickstartsummary.pn-20071203142852-hsiybkmh37q5owwe-1
modified:
  Makefile                       Makefile-20050805140406-d96e3498bb61c5bb
  NEWS                           NEWS-20050323055033-4e00b5db738777ff
  doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg quickstartsummary.sv-20070813143223-5i7bgw7w8s7l3ae2-3
  doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt introducing_bazaar.t-20071114035000-q36a9h57ps06uvnl-5
  doc/index.txt                  index.txt-20070813101924-07gd9i9d2jt124bf-1
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    revno: 3078.1.1
    revision-id:ian.clatworthy at internode.on.net-20071205051920-zj97muk7k5pzjne9
    parent: pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com-20071205035041-vjo05rrhyrqqmgxf
    parent: ian.clatworthy at internode.on.net-20071203143108-meor3lu8jwa3yop0
    committer: Ian Clatworthy <ian.clatworthy at internode.on.net>
    branch nick: ianc-integration
    timestamp: Wed 2007-12-05 15:19:20 +1000
    message:
      Quick Start Card tweaks including fix for #165080 (Ian Clatworthy)
    added:
      doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.png quickstartsummary.pn-20071203142852-hsiybkmh37q5owwe-1
    modified:
      Makefile                       Makefile-20050805140406-d96e3498bb61c5bb
      NEWS                           NEWS-20050323055033-4e00b5db738777ff
      doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg quickstartsummary.sv-20070813143223-5i7bgw7w8s7l3ae2-3
      doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt introducing_bazaar.t-20071114035000-q36a9h57ps06uvnl-5
      doc/index.txt                  index.txt-20070813101924-07gd9i9d2jt124bf-1
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    revno: 3066.4.1
    revision-id:ian.clatworthy at internode.on.net-20071203143108-meor3lu8jwa3yop0
    parent: pqm at pqm.ubuntu.com-20071203012007-1tfytfzp7piacl7q
    committer: Ian Clatworthy <ian.clatworthy at internode.on.net>
    branch nick: bzr.quick-start-tweaks
    timestamp: Tue 2007-12-04 00:31:08 +1000
    message:
      Rename Quick Start Guide to Quick Start Card
    added:
      doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.png quickstartsummary.pn-20071203142852-hsiybkmh37q5owwe-1
    modified:
      Makefile                       Makefile-20050805140406-d96e3498bb61c5bb
      doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg quickstartsummary.sv-20070813143223-5i7bgw7w8s7l3ae2-3
      doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt introducing_bazaar.t-20071114035000-q36a9h57ps06uvnl-5
      doc/index.txt                  index.txt-20070813101924-07gd9i9d2jt124bf-1
=== added file 'doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.png'
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=== modified file 'Makefile'
--- a/Makefile	2007-11-28 00:18:10 +0000
+++ b/Makefile	2007-12-05 05:19:20 +0000
@@ -91,7 +91,8 @@
 	doc/index.txt
 non_txt_files := \
        doc/default.css \
-       doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg
+       doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg \
+       doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.png
 htm_files := $(patsubst %.txt, %.html, $(txt_files)) 
 dev_txt_files := $(wildcard $(addsuffix /*.txt, doc/developers))
 dev_htm_files := $(patsubst %.txt, %.html, $(dev_txt_files)) 

=== modified file 'NEWS'
--- a/NEWS	2007-12-04 18:11:51 +0000
+++ b/NEWS	2007-12-05 05:19:20 +0000
@@ -20,6 +20,13 @@
    * Support logging single merge revisions with short and line log formatters.
      (Kent Gibson)
 
+   * User Guide enhanced with suggested readability improvements from
+     Matt Revell and corrections from John Arbash Meinel. (Ian Clatworthy)
+
+   * Quick Start Guide renamed to Quick Start Card, moved down in
+     the catalog, provided in png format and updated to refer to ``send``
+     instead of ``bundle``. (Ian Clatworthy, #165080)
+
   INTERNALS:
 
     * New -Dhttp debug option reports http connections, requests and responses.

=== modified file 'doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg'
--- a/doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg	2007-08-13 14:33:10 +0000
+++ b/doc/en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg	2007-12-03 14:31:08 +0000
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@
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-   sodipodi:docbase="/home/iacobs/work/pers/bzr-quickref"
-   sodipodi:docname="bzr-quickref.svg"
+   sodipodi:docbase="/home/ian/bzr/repo.packs/bzr.quick-start-tweaks/doc/en/quick-reference"
+   sodipodi:docname="quick-start-summary.svg"
    inkscape:output_extension="org.inkscape.output.svg.inkscape"
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@@ -192,17 +192,17 @@
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+     inkscape:current-layer="g3488"
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      inkscape:showpageshadow="false"
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+     showgrid="false"
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      inkscape:window-height="752"
      inkscape:window-x="0"
-     inkscape:window-y="48" />
+     inkscape:window-y="25" />
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@@ -1173,17 +1173,13 @@
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            id="text4467"
            sodipodi:linespacing="110%"><tspan
-             id="tspan4471"
-             sodipodi:role="line"
-             x="782.40674"
-             y="505.56467">bzr bundle ../myproject-base \</tspan><tspan
              id="tspan8805"
              sodipodi:role="line"
              x="782.40674"
-             y="516.638"> --output ../base.patch</tspan><tspan
+             y="505.56467">bzr send</tspan><tspan
              sodipodi:role="line"
              x="782.40674"
-             y="527.71133"
+             y="516.638"
              id="tspan4473" /></text>
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            xml:space="preserve"
@@ -1195,10 +1191,10 @@
              id="tspan4608"
              sodipodi:role="line"
              x="776.13232"
-             y="494.69229">Create a revision bundle</tspan></text>
+             y="494.69229">Email a merge directive</tspan></text>
       </g>
       <g
-         transform="translate(1e-4,1.0049582)"
+         transform="translate(1e-4,31.004958)"
          id="g3339">
         <text
            xml:space="preserve"
@@ -1228,7 +1224,7 @@
              y="549.18048">directory</tspan></text>
       </g>
       <g
-         transform="translate(1e-4,1.6002853)"
+         transform="translate(1e-4,33.600285)"
          id="g3332">
         <text
            xml:space="preserve"
@@ -1257,6 +1253,36 @@
              x="776.32574"
              y="595.03461">archive</tspan></text>
       </g>
+      <g
+         transform="translate(-1.4135726,38.47762)"
+         id="g2446">
+        <text
+           xml:space="preserve"
+           style="font-size:10.0666666px;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;text-align:start;line-height:110.00000238%;writing-mode:lr-tb;text-anchor:start;fill:#333333;fill-opacity:1;fill-rule:nonzero;stroke:none;stroke-width:30.5;stroke-miterlimit:4;stroke-dasharray:none;stroke-dashoffset:0;stroke-opacity:1;font-family:Bitstream Vera Sans Mono"
+           x="782.40674"
+           y="505.56467"
+           id="text2448"
+           sodipodi:linespacing="110%"><tspan
+             id="tspan2450"
+             sodipodi:role="line"
+             x="782.40674"
+             y="505.56467">bzr send -o ../base.patch</tspan><tspan
+             sodipodi:role="line"
+             x="782.40674"
+             y="516.638"
+             id="tspan2452" /></text>
+        <text
+           xml:space="preserve"
+           style="font-size:12px;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:bold;font-stretch:normal;text-align:start;line-height:100%;writing-mode:lr-tb;text-anchor:start;fill:#333333;fill-opacity:1;fill-rule:nonzero;stroke:none;stroke-width:30.5;stroke-miterlimit:4;stroke-dasharray:none;stroke-dashoffset:0;stroke-opacity:1;font-family:Bitstream Vera Sans"
+           x="776.13232"
+           y="494.69229"
+           id="text2454"
+           sodipodi:linespacing="100%"><tspan
+             id="tspan2456"
+             sodipodi:role="line"
+             x="776.13232"
+             y="494.69229">Create a merge directive</tspan></text>
+      </g>
     </g>
     <text
        xml:space="preserve"
@@ -1303,7 +1329,7 @@
          sodipodi:role="line"
          id="tspan3411"
          x="146.57143"
-         y="97.808769">Quick Start Guide</tspan></text>
+         y="97.808769">Quick Start Card</tspan></text>
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        id="g12314"
        transform="translate(17.946423,1.7472534)"

=== modified file 'doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt'
--- a/doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt	2007-12-04 11:51:38 +0000
+++ b/doc/en/user-guide/introducing_bazaar.txt	2007-12-05 05:19:20 +0000
@@ -153,13 +153,13 @@
 
  * `Bazaar in five minutes`_ - a mini-tutorial
 
- * `Bazaar Quick Start Guide`_ - a one page summary of commonly used commands.
+ * `Bazaar Quick Start Card`_ - a one page summary of commonly used commands.
 
 The online help and `Bazaar User Reference`_ are also particularly useful as
 they provide all the gory details on the commands and options available.
 
 .. _Bazaar in five minutes: ../mini-tutorial/index.html
-.. _Bazaar Quick Start Guide: ../quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg
+.. _Bazaar Quick Start Card: ../quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg
 .. _Bazaar User Reference: ../user-reference/bzr_man.html
 
 We hope you find this manual useful. If you have suggestions on how it

=== modified file 'doc/index.txt'
--- a/doc/index.txt	2007-11-28 00:25:51 +0000
+++ b/doc/index.txt	2007-12-03 14:31:08 +0000
@@ -8,12 +8,13 @@
 Core Documentation
 ==================
 
-* `Quick Start Guide <en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg>`_
-
 * `User Guide <en/user-guide/index.html>`_ 
 
 * `User Reference <en/user-reference/bzr_man.html>`_ 
 
+* `Quick Start Card <en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.svg>`_
+  (`PNG <en/quick-reference/quick-start-summary.png>`_)
+
 * `Release Notes <en/release-notes/NEWS.html>`_
 
 * `Developer Guide <en/developer-guide/HACKING.html>`_




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