Rev 2673: Review feedback. in http://people.ubuntu.com/~robertc/baz2.0/knits

[Robert Collins]

At http://people.ubuntu.com/~robertc/baz2.0/knits

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revno: 2673
revision-id: robertc at robertcollins.net-20070808022602-p2ufghtfektvnc3u
parent: robertc at robertcollins.net-20070802234357-tms20bm74u7lwzwr
committer: Robert Collins <robertc at robertcollins.net>
branch nick: knits
timestamp: Wed 2007-08-08 12:26:02 +1000
message:
  Review feedback.
modified:
  bzrlib/knit.py                 knit.py-20051212171256-f056ac8f0fbe1bd9
=== modified file 'bzrlib/knit.py'
--- a/bzrlib/knit.py	2007-08-02 23:43:57 +0000
+++ b/bzrlib/knit.py	2007-08-08 02:26:02 +0000
@@ -1770,8 +1770,8 @@
         :param index_to_packs: A dict mapping index objects to the transport
             and file names for obtaining data.
         :param writer: A tuple (pack.ContainerWriter, write_index) which
-            is contains the pack to write, and the index that reads from
-            it will be associated with.
+            contains the pack to write, and the index that reads from it will
+            be associated with.
         """
         if writer:
             self.container_writer = writer[0]
@@ -1784,7 +1784,7 @@
     def add_raw_records(self, sizes, raw_data):
         """Add raw knit bytes to a storage area.
 
-        The data is spooled to the container writer in one bytes record per
+        The data is spooled to the container writer in one bytes-record per
         raw data item.
 
         :param sizes: An iterable containing the size of each raw data segment.